(edited by semcho.1943)
7 Reasons to be Interested in Guild Wars 2
The first issue I see is the article says 7,and you have 7, but in your introduction paragraph you say 10 Also you have a sentence stating “Game enchanted me…” when it should say something like This game or The game.
Most of the issues I see are little spelling, grammatical or phrasing issues like that easily fixed with some editing, and maybe a second eye.
I agree with your points, and Guild Wars is a fantastic game with an amazing community. And No Monthly Fee <3