I don’t like putting effort into things, that might suck anyway.
So I did a quick 30min free-write, of a story I was thinking about.
So yes grammar and everything else will suck, remember FREEWRITE.
Well give me your opinion on this, if ya don’t mind. If i get enough comments. I might make a story from it.
As I woke up from my dream, as I took my first breath into this new world. I woke up in a city, but not like those that may be known. This city was made of trees we did not cut it that way, it grew that way. It grew special for us and so did the cloths we wear. Then I began to notice whisper about the mist and I was drawn into it. Maybe it was because my dream showed me the mist and so I was beckon towards it. Yet no one ever said it out loud, there was only whispers of it and so I could never figure out where and how to enter this mist. That is when I decided to travel until. So that I may discover this Mist, I set my eyes on the mountains ahead. Yet it would take many months to get there, which even being new to this world I knew the road was dangerous. However, I was confident in my ability to trick anything and to escape when needed, for I seemed to have skills of a trickery nature and so I started my journey.
So after some time I reach the snowy mountains, which the beings that lived there was broader and taller than anyone I’ve ever seen, you could have even called them giants. Here you hear nothing but tales of the Mist and how only the greatest can enter it. So I believe I could have found it from here, but no. Even here where they were so proud of those who enter the Mist, they still dare not talk about the entrance to it. However, before I moved on I saw one who needed help. It was her brother, he had been twisted. He could not handle the destruction of his family grounds and so he changes to a thing that was unrecognizable and yet his sister recognizes him. There was no cure for him and so we had to do the ultimate maser and put him down, before another would fall to his madness. Sadly there was no law here, there was no system. So cases like this had to be taken care of like this. However, you see these beings would not let a debt go unpaid. These beings prides was bigger than the mountain they lived upon. So in the end she came with me, as a bodyguard. She was better with a bow then anyone I’ve ever saw. However, what truly amaze me were her great-sword abilities.
So we decided to head to the next great city, a city I’ve herd to be the most advance city there is and yet to be surrender by nature. One that was built within nature without destroy nature, which