An Idea for Personal Story!
I love it. I want more personal story! It was the most fun I had until I started doingg dungeons. I love the lore and story.
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And all who stood by and did nothing, who are they to criticize the sacrifices of others?
Our blood has bought their lives.
And all who stood by and did nothing, who are they to criticize the sacrifices of others?
Our blood has bought their lives.
What Trahearne Story needs, is a better writer.
What we got was a noble effort with a bit of creativity and a modicum of investment behind it, but on the face of it, it was outright sabotaged by not understanding the basic tropes of written fiction, less of all the synergy between the player and game elements in an interactive world.
Here’s the improvement plan in four simple steps:
- 1. Kick out whoever was responsible for writing the original.
- 2. Look on the Internet for five minutes and hire someone who’s ever written a successful fanfic.
- 3. Saddle them with the task of rewriting dialogue in existing missions.
- 4. A few months and lots of angry and obscene gestures from your newly hired specialist later, recast whoever you find lying around the office as voice actors and redub the lines.
Done.
Addendum: if in Step 3 your writer hands over plain text instead of acting directions to the voice actors, start over from Step 1.