I love it. You found the perfect balance between humour and horror.
Bringing back characters in callbacks from PS was inspired, and the returning Diarmid-zombie was chilling. I think a little more discussion or a click-through reaction from Occam would be even more powerful there, but as it stands, it’s solid.
Lord Faren the swordmaster.. oh my god I loved that. I was laughing myself silly! The only thing that would have made it better was if his speedo had become a leopard print or something.
Bravo!!
The zone is much more fluid, the progression much more intuitive, and the story very engaging.
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