Guild Wars 2

Hello,

I have begun writing a Guild Wars fiction. If you can help me read it and provide feedback, I would deeply appreciate it. It takes place approximately 16 years after the current Living Story Season 2, in an alternate future where the humans have returned to their height of power as a dominant race similar to Guild Wars 1
Hope you like it

@Moderators: If you see this PLEASE DO NOT move this to Community Creations section because I would like feedback from Lore readers specifically. Thanks!!

The story is updated on a weekly basis (Last Updated 29/05/2015)
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Critical comments help me improve and are thus especially appreciated!

Link to the Story:
https://www.dropbox.com/sh/k8wcqmqfmiuooey/AACFLxxZKKNWnmFFp1hHjI5da?n=82891413

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Well, firstly don’t try and make a career out of this. I liked some of your ideas and plots but i cant get into any of the characters because there was no back story, i had no reason to care about them as they were telepathic and “super heroes” and the would obviously save the day and come to no harm, its a good first try but predictable and lacks originality.

(Spoiler)
I did like that Anise was in the story but not sure if creators at Anet appreciate using their characters

I’m sure they are fine with their characters being used in fan fiction. After all, isn’t that the point of fan fiction?

Hey,

Throughout the weeks there has been some small updates. Please go have a look
You can post your feedback on either the Dropbox page or over here
Thanks