Ok, since you wanted feedback:
1)It is almost impossible to say anything about your gameplay if you decide to randomly speed up or slow down parts of a fight.
If you want to make a vid to show off how good you are, or for entertainement, thats perfectly fine, but you cant really expect feedback on your performance in it.
The sound is also important. Again: if you want people to watch the vid, a song will do fine. If you want feedback, the original game audio is important.2) If you want people to judge your performance you should choose a match where you dont domintae. Everyone can play well if their team is superior.
For example you spent a lot of time sitting on close, even capped it with two people. That works well as long as your team can hold the other fights without you, but for an even matchup, you would need to roatate much more (and probably do).3) Its kinda hard to see how well you fought (speed again ^^). I realised some good moves including portal and blink. At one point youve spent a lot of time autoattacking against a projectile destruction field. Another time you were stunned and took a little too long to break it.
It also looked to me like your general illusion uptime wasnt very high.
Most of the ‘really good’ mesmers I fought have at least two of them up and running all the time, and that whilst constantly shattering something. No idea how they do that tho.Thats really all I can say here, mostly negative I guess, but thats just because im better at giving negative feedback, not because there wasnt anything good to say. ^^
Heya Asrat, first thing first thank you and i appreciate your the feedback!
i tried to do something in the middle where its not to draggy and entertaining(i assume) at the same time..but i guess your right its kinda hard to see the detail gameplay like this..i will look into (or try) a better format. i am looking forward with interacting with the community the most really. and i will also try to improve my illusion up time that you mention!(its kinda tricky to do so!)