I made another topic, because this is a little bit different to those similar topics. And careful, spoilers!!!
I don’t satisfy with plot at all. I barely can call it “Personal Story”. It’s not. It’s not my character’s story, I don’t feel it.
Plot means that the story tells us about our hero, our hero are the main subject. And if great things happen in the world and if our hero is not that guy, who does those great, historical things, in this case, historical events shouldn’t be important. And what should be important, it is our character, what is happening with our character.
Plot started with “This is my story”, right? Now, what we have right now? We have events, with huge scale, and we have our character, our hero. These events are the main subject in GW2 story. But what about our character? Does it really his story? Or he is only a small part of the story? In this case it isn’t his story, and he isn’t as main hero of a plot, as he should be. He just some person, one of the figures in the plot, nothing more.
I can call “this is my character’s story” only that part, which shows us a small part of our character’s past. I can call “this is my character’s story” only that part, which tells us about our character’s race. When we starting working with members of the three orders, that’s when our character’s story is finished. That’s what I feel.
After meeting with members of three orders, the story tells us about huge events, historical events, about dragons. We join one of the three orders of Tyria and then plot shows us a little bit about order we choose. Than plot tells us about mini race we choose. After that, plot bring us to Claw Island, and here comes this sylvary npc. From that moment he is the one, who are making negotiations, our character step back to shadow.
After Claw Island we helped some members of Durmand Priory, where our character was a little bit in a shadow, because this npc sylvari step forward. And then, mother of all Sylvari, the Pale Tree, showed us a future, and in this vision, not our character, but this npc sylvari, was the one, who will lead people. He is the one, not us!
Tell me, why do I care about this npc? How is it suppose to be interesting for me, listening this story, which tells not about my hero, but someone who I don’t know, and don’t care about?
What next? Because I stop doing my “Personal Story” here, on 55 lvl, after this little prophecy about this sylvari is going to lead, is going to be general. Why him? Why not our character gets this job? In the “Flameseeker Prophecies” our character is the one, who this prophecy was talking about. Glint told my character that he is the one.
And after that we have similar situation, but only with some npc? Was that supposed to be exiting?
Where is “personal story” than? This is supposed to be a personal story of my character, his story, but not some sylvari and other npc!
If your plot is telling about killing elder dragon, than our hero must be the main figure on this chess desk. Other important heroes must be not as main as our character. If he is not the main, than this event with killing elder dragons suppose to take a step back to a shadow.
It’s like in our real lives. It’s not important about wars, revolutions, and other historical events. It’s all about us and what we are feeling, who we care about and what WE do. These huge events are not as important for us, as our own life, they are not as important as our feeling about that girl, slim, beautiful, with dark long straight hairs, her blue eyes, her smile (that was example)… That is important for us, because it’s our lives, its is our story, not those world events with other people.
In Guild Wars 2 we have “this is my story” only when plot are telling us about our character’s past. That’s it. After that, no references about our hero’s story. I don’t feel it. I don’t care about this huge event with killing elder dragon, if my character is not the one, who leads people, but someone else. This isn’t my character’s story, this story is about Trahearne. But I don’t care about this person, not even the members of Destiny’s Edge, they are not the main heroes for me, they just figures in a personal story, my character’s story. I got really angry when I heard that this Trahearne is making speech about Zhaitan. Who is this guy? Why do you put him and made him the main chess figure?
If our char are not the main hero of this story about killing dragon, than it is not the story you should show us. At least this story shouldn’t be the main, and the main should be something that connected to our hero directly.
(edited by Kreslin.6832)