Guild Wars 2

So I am stuck mid Ruby, and not sure if I’ll make it to the next tier by the close of the season, so I have been playing around with other builds.

I know this isn’t the mete Ele right now, but wanted to try something different. At work right now so I can’t test it out, but any chance this would be a viable build for PvP?

Suggestions or tweaks are welcome, I know it is very glassy. And that death would be almost immediate on a mid fight

http://gw2skills.net/editor/?vFAQJAoYnUMAlNg9XCOOA8RgFBALIAEKfAut2Z7tdIGsDKCA-TJhAABQfCAA4BAs0+DkVGAA

Or with less condition damage and more condition duration:

http://gw2skills.net/editor/?vFAQJAoYnUMAlNg9XCOOA8RgFBALIAEKfAut2Z7tdIGsDKCA-TJhAABws/g+lBA4BAA9JAAA