Am I beefy enough?
Maybe. It’s hard to tell without actually playing the build (and I don’t have access to a computer this weekend.) I do find it weird that all your traits are focused on doing loads of damage, while your utilities and gear are pretty much tailored to a more defensive playstyle. A big problem is the lack of condition removal, which is pretty kitten important in sPvP.
Am I strong in team-fights?
Frankly, no. Or better said, you’ll not be better in a team-fight than you are on your own, and you’re team won’t benefit more from your presence than they would from any other player. It’s a rather ‘’selfish" build, but so are most damage-focused builds, so don’t feel bad about that.
Am I strong solo?
Probably, yeah. Again, it’s hard to say without actually playing, but you should be able to hold your own in 1v1 and probably do okay in 1v2. What I’d be worried about is not having enough raw damage to overpower an enemy, or not being defensive enough to outlast them. Maybe this build is a good middle-ground, but I doubt it.
What should I change?
It’s hard to say, since your build lacks focus. I’m going to try and rework it, without changing what I think is the core of the build. The core is probably that it’s somewhere in between damage and survivability.
Changes I would make:
Weapons
You’re over-relying on the Greatsword with your traits and for little reason. If you want to hold points, I’d advice picking up the Hammer instead, but then you’ll have to do away with your points in Zeal (more on that later).
I also don’t think the Torch is the perfect off-hand for you here. If you want an off-hand that works like your build (mix between offensive and defensive), I’d go with the Focus. Also consider the Shield if you’re mainly holding points.
Utilities
Your utilities don’t get any trait-support. Maybe pick up a few traits that improve your Signets (I’m suggesting Signets, because that would easiest would your current point-allocation) and picking up a few more signets. Signet of Resolve will give you a bit more condition removal and if you go until Grandmaster in Radiance (losing points in Zeal), each Signet will remove a condition.
If you prefer Shouts, adjust the traits in Honor and maybe max that out as well (again, giving you access to condition removal).
Traits
Zeal is only really good if you use Spirit Weapons or Symbols, and you’re not really relying on either. Most of the points from this line could be reallocated, either putting more in Radiance or Honor (unless you start traiting anew).
Generally speaking, you have too much traits that only benefit one weapon (or one skill), which isn’t really efficient.
Grade my build between 0-10.
5.5/10 _"Come see me after class."
It’s not a terrible build and it might work for you, but it’s main problem is that it lacks focus, which also makes it hard to give feedback on it. You took a lot of good skills and good traits, but they don’t really work well together. I’m also unsure as to how well your build fits with your role. This build looks designed to roam around, instead of holding points.
How does your build play?
“Come on, hit me!”
