Guild Wars 2

Alright, I created a Build for my Guardian, as I like defence, it’s a tanky build:
http://www.gw2build.com/builds/simulator.php#1.3.5.11.19.0.0.0.0.0.53.72.74.65.77.8.8.7.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.0.10.0.30.30.0

Any idea, suggestions and advices on what to get better is welcome.
I hope it’s not too noob
Ty for the attention.
<3

Sorry for double post, but I made another Build with a different calculator:
http://en.gw2skills.net/editor/?fUAQNApeSlUgSDHHyvDf4EQVBAweAAAAc9AAAAA;T8Ag0ytEOJ1StlyKKbM2IsxajzGpNLGGMMJA
If the Link doesn’t open, just copy and paste in your navigator.
I think this Build is better than the 1st, but Im still waiting a good player to say something.
Thanks for the attention.