Can I get thoughts/tips on my build?
i think you would up your damage alot more putting fury on phantasms instead of 1h sword trait. looks like a phantasm build. squeezing a point from the condi clear on heal into the last trait line that to reduce all clone summoning skills will help your damage also.
depends how good you are at fighting condi.. but for them ost part you can just duck your head into a fight lay 2 phants and auto attack from max range with greatsword. changing your utility to the mantra condi cleans will give you more cleansing power if you think you need it.