Guild Wars 2

Hello Fam,
Its yo boy Daniel, now I took the liberty of making a semi passable build. To be honest I am ashamed to even post it, but I want your feedback. So far it sort of can work, but i feel like it is sort of a jack of all trades and maybe thats why it is meant to fail. Its a condi shatter but with paladin amulet, yes, it sounds bad already but hear me out. Paladin amulet with nightmare runes. Staff shield sword. Its meant to be a sort of hybrid point support spec. Its mean to cc and use the staff to stack those passive condis, while at the same time having enough power damage to tickle your enemies. The link is posted below.
http://gw2skills.net/editor/?vhAQNAW8encfClphVoBeoBEgilnjCdCynHreQT0F9sACgDD-TZRHABCt/g9lBA4gAMwVAQgHAAA
I know it sounds horrible but so far it can sort of work, i want feedback, please give it to me.