Need little help with my build

Need little help with my build

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Posted by: this is my pin.4502

this is my pin.4502

Hi all,

I did so many builds to make one, that good for my gameplay. I have now two thats i think are good, but i am still dying. Maybe, because in my builds missing something or because I have all the time in game 10 fps :-D.

My builds go on power, precision and ferocity. Defense is in first build evade and on second invisibility.

My gameplay is like do as much damage as possible without break.

Gameplay attack and hide isn’t strange for me, but now i want to try that attack without break.

I just need some ideas what there missing or what is useless and is it better Shadow Arts build or daredevil for that.

First build on evade
http://gw2skills.net/editor/?vZAQRAoY6an8MBFPhFOBOOBkmiFaCTLAMhiAzXwOYJc7BMc2TA-TxBGABSfSAIa/R53UKBLT/Qgq/w7RAAgHAwmhAAWVBA-e

Second build on invisibility
http://gw2skills.net/editor/?vZAQRAoY6alsMhynY3TwwJw/EH0EF/DShZY/AD3eqDgJMCA-TxBGABlpfIQ1f49IAI9JBgo9HlfTpEEgHAwmhAAWVBA-e