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Impressive work, Just!
English may not be your native tongue, but you still wrote an interesting story.
If anything, I’d say the story’s pace is a little too quick. There are a few unneeded capitalizations, but on the whole, this is a good story. I would greatly enjoy seeing more work from you.
An excellent display of raw ingenuity, overpowering determination, and the undeniable benefits of salvage! A+, sir!
~Statician Klixx.
I have always wondered how a writer would handle the elementalist and the challenges presented by their element-swapping technique.
My good Chaos, that was fantastic. Quite simply, I was on the edge of my seat for the entirety of the fight. Excellent pacing throughout the story, and exquisite command of language. I give it a resounding 10, and eagerly look forward to more work from you.