Guild Wars 2

You start by telling us how you aren’t old and you have ambition. You go to say you have academic qualifications in two fields, then how you work in/on both those fields and how that makes you unique. Any uniqueness, ambition or other would be left for us to infer, you telling us what we should think comes off like you’re grasping a bit. (just commenting on your writing … you’re a writer). You are writing outside of your day job and then we get this sample of your writing/analysis skills: that implies (or doesn’t) motivation, talent, etc. (if my sentences here are seem clumsy, probably I’m not a writer)

The rest of it looks good and ups for putting in a decent amount of work. I lake any special skills to comment on its content, and I’m one of the lucky ones that got out of gw2 early, so I haven’t been through the pain of the stories. From the little I’ve been exposed to it, it sounds like to watch the characters in George Lucas latest SW films.

Game of Thrones and GW2 in same sentence … lol