Episode 5: Flame and Frost: Retribution
Problem: As the conclusion of Flame and Frost, this episode takes place in a dungeon, which, in itself isn’t necessarily a problem, as the conclusion of the Zhiatan story line ends in a dungeon. Unfortunately however, this dungeon is already covered by two fractals… Also, the fractal versions are missing the ‘prisoner rescue operation’ that take place between part one and two, which defeats half the purpose of the raid in the first place.
Solution 1: Revert it back into a dungeon.
Solution 2: As you did with the Thermo Reactor Explosion, you could make it so that one can enter the fractal in story mode, where they view and play the original version. Unfortunately, this still has the negative side effect that one must enter via the fractal rather than an open world location, which deflates the realism and stuns the flow.
Solution 3: Rebuild the dungeon into an even simpler, smaller scale instance that incorporates the ‘break-in’ from the first fractal, the missing rescue operation, and the ‘boss fight’ from the second fractal.
Episode 6: The Secret of Southsun
Problem: Too much of the story is not included in-game, in-game content needs to be presented better.
Solution: The open world event where, after successfully defending the vacation paradise’s wall, it is revealed that Cannach is the villain, should be converted into an instance, with the confession brought to the spot light via a cut scene. After she finishes speaking, the cut scene could then take us back in time a bit to show us the confrontation between Cannach and the consortium employee that was previously depicted via a short story blog post.
Episode 7: Last Stand at Southsun
Problem: same as episode 6
Solution: There is not so much a conversion issue here, we could have two instances; one were we capture of Cannach, and the following, our delivery of consortium contracts to the burning ship.
Episode 8: Dragon Bash
Implementation: Only the content directly relating to the death and investigation of the councilor need be included, as the festival itself is now an annual event. Instance where councilor dies -> Instance with Marjory in DR -> Open world investigation -> Instance where we detain culprit.
Episode 9: Sky Pirates of Tryia
Problem: Same as episode 5… the implementation of dungeons into fractals has really come back to bite them in the kitten . Its not as if they can simply skip it either, because then you lose a huge chunk of the story.
Solution: Same as episode 5
Episode 10: Cutthroat Politics
Problem: Can’t do an election for a vote that has already been decided, and beyond the election there is nothing noteworthy in season progression… yet, that the election occurred has a definite impact on the season and character progression.
Solution: Rewrite. Complete flip. Rather than canceling out the previous version, create a different retelling of the election that runs parallel with the first, and focuses more on the campaigns than the actual voting. Maybe the competitors have some problems with the shady bazaar traders… you would have to create a stand-alone story that fits into the season as a whole. But that’s not necessarily a bad thing, you can take this chance to fill in plot holes, maybe a meeting with Scarlet before she is revealed as a villain.